{"id":7048,"date":"2017-07-14T08:34:42","date_gmt":"2017-07-14T12:34:42","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/kate-hill.com\/blog\/?p=7048"},"modified":"2017-07-14T08:34:42","modified_gmt":"2017-07-14T12:34:42","slug":"beverley-oakley-rejection-rejection-perhaps-youre-not-meeting-readers-expectations","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/kate-hill.com\/blog\/?p=7048","title":{"rendered":"Beverley Oakley &#8211; Rejection! Rejection! Perhaps you\u2019re not meeting reader\u2019s expectations\u2026"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Rejection! Rejection! Perhaps you\u2019re not meeting reader\u2019s expectations\u2026<\/p>\n<p>By Beverley Oakley<\/p>\n<p>A forbidden love, insurmountable odds and an angst-ridden ending. The first \u201cromance\u201d I wrote had all these elements. I\u2019d thrown my heart and soul into my 587-page masterpiece, so why did Star-crossed Lovers keep getting rejected?<\/p>\n<p>It wasn\u2019t until my sixth rejection that I got editorial feedback clueing me into the one essential that Star-crossed Lovers lacked: the happy ending.<\/p>\n<p>When I was a child, L.M. Montgomery\u2019s Anne of Green Gables and Louisa May Alcott\u2019s Little Women were passionately re-read favourites. As a teenager, I loved Georgette Heyer and Victoria Holt. Yet, despite being a devoted and avid romance reader, I failed to pick up on what these books delivered: a happy ending to follow all manner of trials and tribulations, reassuring the reader that, come what may, there is always hope.<\/p>\n<p>I started writing Star-crossed Lovers when I was 16, pounding the keys of the yellow typewriter I\u2019d been given for my 12th birthday, long into the night. A year later, and with a pile of nearly 600 pages, I\u2019d exhausted all plot avenues \u2013 and myself.<\/p>\n<p>How would I end my story?<\/p>\n<p>The romances I most loved reading had always reduced me to tears. This, obviously, was the benchmark of a truly good romance and I was determined my readers, too, must be equally moved to tears by my words.<\/p>\n<p>I already had a monumental love story. One only had to look at that nearly 600-page pile to see the evidence. But perhaps, I wondered, it would really up the ante to throw in real, heart-rending tragedy to wring from my readers the maximum emotion I desired my book to evoke.<\/p>\n<p>And what better way to do that than to drown my heroine in a dam in country Australia on the last page? Angsty and epic!<\/p>\n<p>So, that\u2019s what I did.<\/p>\n<p>After five form rejections following an undertaking with Australia Post that depleted much of my pocket money over those next few months, I finally got advice offering more than just a hazy understanding of what a romance novel really required. \u201cUnfortunately, your ending is not in line with the expectations of romance readers so I regret to inform you that on this occasion we must pass,\u201d wrote editor number six.<\/p>\n<p>Apparently, I gathered, when a writer puts a book out into the world, that writer has a contract to deliver. While a mystery requires something to solve, a romance requires a happy ending.<\/p>\n<p>The lightbulb moment had come not a moment too soon.<\/p>\n<p>Nevertheless, though I learned these basics at seventeen, it was still another twenty-six years before I got my first publishing contract with Robert Hale (UK).<\/p>\n<p>By now I was more than ready to right past wrongs.<\/p>\n<p>Therefore, in the first of three books written under my Beverley Eikli name, I joyfully delivered literary compensation to poor Emily, the heroine of Star-crossed Lovers, drowned in 1901 in a farm dam in South Australia\u2019s Clare Valley.<\/p>\n<p>Emily, of course, was forever consigned to the murky depths of literary obscurity, but her successor, Sarah, in Lady Sarah\u2019s Redemption &#8211; my first novel written under my Beverley Eikli name &#8211; was plucked from the North Sea. Yes, Sarah was rescued from a watery grave, thus delivering atonement and recognition for poor Emily.<\/p>\n<p>And if that alone doesn\u2019t make you weep, perhaps the beautiful \u2018aaah\u2019 moment on page 300, will, as my hero Roland proposes to the now redeemed spoiled rich girl.<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s the happy ending to end all happy endings.<\/p>\n<p>Except, of course, for the ending in my latest romance, The Duchess and the Highwayman.<\/p>\n<div class=\"separator\" style=\"clear: both; text-align: center;\">\n<a href=\"http:\/\/1.bp.blogspot.com\/-_KLkHqCcZ_0\/WU8M5qbZs7I\/AAAAAAAAMKo\/KtscbtnxelcjT4n2HrurJ2xwpqIspFs9gCK4BGAYYCw\/s1600\/Banner%2BThe%2BDuchess%2Band%2Bthe%2BHighwayman.jpg\" imageanchor=\"1\" style=\"margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" height=\"187\" src=\"https:\/\/1.bp.blogspot.com\/-_KLkHqCcZ_0\/WU8M5qbZs7I\/AAAAAAAAMKo\/KtscbtnxelcjT4n2HrurJ2xwpqIspFs9gCK4BGAYYCw\/s400\/Banner%2BThe%2BDuchess%2Band%2Bthe%2BHighwayman.jpg\" width=\"500\" \/><\/a><\/div>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\">\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif; font-size: large;\"><b>The Duchess and the Highwayman<\/b><\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"text-align: center;\">\n<span style=\"color: #38761d; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><b>By Beverley Oakley<\/b><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #38761d; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><b><br \/>\n<\/b><\/span> <\/p>\n<div style=\"text-align: left;\">\n<b style=\"color: red; font-family: georgia, &quot;times new roman&quot;, serif;\"><span style=\"font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Beverley is giving away a $10 Amazon Gift Certificate and an ebook&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"background-color: white;\">The Mysterious Governess.<\/span><span style=\"background-color: white;\">to randomly drawn winners via rafflecopter during the tour. Please use the RaffleCopter below to enter. Remember you may increase your chances of winning by visiting the other tour stops. You may find those locations&nbsp;<a href=\"http:\/\/reviewsbycacb.blogspot.com\/p\/blog-tour-beverley-oakley.html\" style=\"text-decoration-line: none;\" target=\"_blank\">here<\/a>.&nbsp;<\/span><\/b><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"text-align: left;\">\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"text-align: left;\">\n<span style=\"color: #134f5c; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><b>BLURB:&nbsp;<\/b><\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"text-align: left;\">\n<\/div>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/3.bp.blogspot.com\/-26_JQGtuh6I\/WU8StfIgAOI\/AAAAAAAAMK4\/t8D4BMQkhacJ72pHBPH-e59ER2-2nzRsgCK4BGAYYCw\/s1600\/The%2BDuchess%2Band%2Bthe%2BHighwayman%2Bimage.jpg\" imageanchor=\"1\" style=\"clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" height=\"200\" src=\"https:\/\/3.bp.blogspot.com\/-26_JQGtuh6I\/WU8StfIgAOI\/AAAAAAAAMK4\/t8D4BMQkhacJ72pHBPH-e59ER2-2nzRsgCK4BGAYYCw\/s200\/The%2BDuchess%2Band%2Bthe%2BHighwayman%2Bimage.jpg\" width=\"133\" \/><\/a><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">A duchess disguised as a lady\u2019s maid; a gentleman parading as a highwayman.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">She\u2019s on the run from a murderer, he\u2019s in pursuit of one\u2026<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">In a remote Norfolk manor, Phoebe, Lady Cavanaugh is wrongfully accused by her servants of her brutal husband\u2019s murder.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">There\u2019s little sympathy in the district for the duchess who\u2019s taken a lover and made clear she despised her husband. The local magistrate has also vowed revenge since Lady Cavanaugh rebuffed his advances.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">When Phoebe is discovered in the forest wearing only a chemise stained with the blood of her murdered husband, she persuades the noble \u2018highwayman\u2019 who rescues her that she is Lady Cavanaugh\u2019s maidservant.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Hugh Redding has his own reasons for hunting down the man who would have Phoebe tried and hanged for murder. He plans to turn \u2018the maidservant with aspirations above her station&#8217; into the &#8216;lady&#8217; who might testify against the very villain who would see Phoebe dead.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">But despite the fierce attraction between Phoebe and the &#8216;highwayman&#8217;, Phoebe is not in a position to admit she&#8217;s the &#8216;murderous duchess&#8217; hunted across the land.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Seizing an opportunity to strike at the social and financial standing of the man who has profited by her distress, Phoebe is drawn into a dangerous intrigue.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">But when disaster strikes, she fears Hugh will lack the sympathy or understanding of her unusual predicament to even want to save her a second time.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><br \/>\n<\/span> <span style=\"color: purple; font-family: georgia, times new roman, serif;\">Buy Links:&nbsp;<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #0b5394; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/amzn.to\/2tccnQu\" target=\"_blank\">Amazon<\/a> | <a href=\"https:\/\/www.books2read.com\/u\/38Dw6d\" target=\"_blank\">All other buy links<\/a><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><\/p>\n<p><\/span><span style=\"color: #666666; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif; font-size: large;\">~*~*~*~*~*~<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #134f5c; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><span style=\"color: #134f5c; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif; font-weight: bold;\">Excerpt:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #38761d; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"> \u201cThe doctor doubts Ulrick will make Michelmas.\u201d The lazy drawl of her husband\u2019s cousin punctuated the silence as Phoebe resumed her position in an armchair by the fire.<br \/>\nWentworth raised his cut glass tumbler to the light as he sighed in appreciation of Ulrick\u2019s best brandy. He took a sip and smacked his lips, meeting Phoebe\u2019s eye across her sleeping husband whom she\u2019d made more comfortable in his large leather armchair with the tasselled cushion Phoebe had embroidered to support his neck.<br \/>\nThe odious creature could not help but interpret Phoebe\u2019s critical expression correctly, but there was no defensiveness in his tone as he chuckled. \u201cThe old bastard can\u2019t enjoy his riches when he\u2019s gone.\u201d His teeth were white; sharp and wolfish beneath his black moustache and Phoebe looked away, pretending concentration on her handiwork while her stomach clenched with revulsion and fear. She would not dignify Wentworth\u2019s grasping remarks with a response.<br \/>\nFor a few minutes Ulrick\u2019s wheezing, rattling cough and the hiss of the fire broke the silence. The harsh caw of a raven in the darkness made Phoebe jump but she kept her fingers busy with her embroidery and her head averted from Wentworth\u2019s hard stare.<br \/>\nTonight? Would Wentworth insist on claiming her tonight, with Ulrick so very ill and likely to need her?<br \/>\nWentworth drained his glass, placing the empty vessel clumsily upon the low table beside him. Empty vessel. It\u2019s what she\u2019d always been made to feel as Ulrick\u2019s wife. \u201cUlrick was always mean with his liquor. A good supply for his heir, then, eh, Phoebe?\u201d Ulrick\u2019s Heir. Wentworth imbued the word with the disgust he\u2019d always felt for the fact that Wentworth was not Ulrick\u2019s heir. It was hardly better than the reproach that had always hardened Ulrick\u2019s tone in the days he could speak and implied that Phoebe had failed in providing him with a son to continue the family line.<br \/>\nPhoebe glanced up and saw Wentworth\u2019s thin lips were pursed, observing fleetingly that he looked like a malevolent raven, his dark eyes glittering in the face she\u2019d once thought so handsome. She tried not to show her fear.<br \/>\n\u201cHow long do you suppose it\u2019ll take my brother to drink the lot once he inherits?\u201d There it was. The bitterness he didn\u2019t bother to hide.<br \/>\n\u201cHush, Wentworth. You\u2019ll wake Ulrick.\u201d Phoebe cast the sleeping invalid a nervous look.<br \/>\n\u201cThe doctor opines that our poorly Lord Cavanaugh will not last three months.\u201d Wentworth didn\u2019t trouble to lower his voice. \u201cMy guess is he\u2019ll be gone long before Michealmas.\u201d<br \/>\nPhoebe could bear it no longer. She dropped her handiwork into her lap and sent her husband\u2019s regular and increasingly unwelcome guest an imploring look. \u201cPlease, Wentworth. He\u2019s not dead yet. Have the good grace to keep such thoughts to yourself. What if he hears you?\u201d<br \/>\nWentworth gave a short laugh. \u201cWhat do I have to lose by my graveyard talk? It\u2019s not as if Ulrick\u2019s in any position to deny me what my imbecile brothers already have simply by virtue of them being alive.\u201d<br \/>\nHow many times had she heard the same complaints? Phoebe forced aside her weary frustration and rose. \u201cI\u2019m going to bed.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #666666; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif; font-size: large;\">~*~*~*~*~*~<\/span><\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #134f5c; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><b>Author Info:&nbsp;<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #134f5c; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<div class=\"aolmail_gmail_default\" style=\"background-color: white;\">\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<a href=\"http:\/\/3.bp.blogspot.com\/-LezkHD_Nad4\/WU9YWeNYnQI\/AAAAAAAAMLY\/47VAsAAO5RYRG1apnV7usFEorAVZ6_DXwCK4BGAYYCw\/s1600\/beverley-eikli-author-pic-copy.jpg\" imageanchor=\"1\" style=\"clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" border=\"0\" height=\"200\" src=\"https:\/\/3.bp.blogspot.com\/-LezkHD_Nad4\/WU9YWeNYnQI\/AAAAAAAAMLY\/47VAsAAO5RYRG1apnV7usFEorAVZ6_DXwCK4BGAYYCw\/s200\/beverley-eikli-author-pic-copy.jpg\" width=\"132\" \/><\/a><span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Beverley Oakley was seventeen when she bundled up her first her 500+ page romance and sent it to a publisher. Unfortunately&nbsp;drowning her heroine on the last page was apparently not in line with the expectations of romance readers so Beverley became&nbsp;a journalist.<\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Twenty-six years later Beverley was delighted to receive her first publishing contract from Robert Hale (UK) for a romance in which she ensured her&nbsp;heroine was&nbsp;<em style=\"box-sizing: border-box;\">saved<\/em>&nbsp;from drowning in&nbsp;the icy North Sea.<\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Since 2009&nbsp;Beverley has written more than thirteen&nbsp;historical romances, mostly set in England during the early nineteenth century. Mystery, intrigue and adventure spill from their pages and if she can pull off a thrilling race to save someone\u2019s honour \u2013 or a worthy damsel from the noose \u2013 it\u2019s time to celebrate with a good single malt Scotch.<\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">Beverley lives with her husband, two daughters and a Rhodesian Ridgeback puppy the size of a pony opposite a picturesque nineteenth century lunatic asylum. She also writes Africa-set adventure-filled romances tarring&nbsp;handsome bush pilot heroes, and historical romances with less steam and more sexual tension, as Beverley Eikli.<\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<span style=\"color: purple; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\">You can get in contact with Beverley&nbsp;at:<\/span><\/div>\n<div style=\"box-sizing: border-box; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.618; padding: 0px;\">\n<span style=\"color: #0b5394; font-family: &quot;georgia&quot; , &quot;times new roman&quot; , serif;\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.beverleyoakley.com\/\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" style=\"cursor: pointer;\" target=\"_blank\">website<\/a>&nbsp;|&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.facebook.com\/AuthorBeverleyOakley\/\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" style=\"cursor: pointer;\" target=\"_blank\">Facebook<\/a>&nbsp;|&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/au.pinterest.com\/beverleyeikli\/\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" style=\"cursor: pointer;\" target=\"_blank\">Pinterest<\/a>&nbsp;|&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/BeverleyOakley\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" style=\"cursor: pointer;\" target=\"_blank\">Twitter<\/a>&nbsp;|&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.goodreads.com\/author\/list\/5989577.Beverley_Oakley\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" style=\"cursor: pointer;\" target=\"_blank\">Goodreads<\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p><a class=\"rcptr\" data-raflid=\"801c221b8\" data-template=\"\" data-theme=\"classic\" href=\"http:\/\/www.rafflecopter.com\/rafl\/display\/801c221b8\/\" id=\"rcwidget_ddwml8mm\" rel=\"nofollow\">a Rafflecopter giveaway<\/a><br \/>\n<a href=\"http:\/\/www.rafflecopter.com\/rafl\/display\/801c221b8\/\"http:\/\/www.rafflecopter.com\/rafl\/display\/801c221b8\/<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Rejection! Rejection! Perhaps you&rsquo;re not meeting reader&rsquo;s expectations&hellip; By Beverley Oakley A forbidden love, insurmountable odds and an angst-ridden ending. The first &ldquo;romance&rdquo; I wrote had all these elements. I&rsquo;d thrown my heart and soul into my 587-page masterpiece, so why did Star-crossed Lovers keep getting rejected? 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